34354043435480 Glad it was enjoyable. From what "plans" have been made for this story Twilight-Rarity seems to "main" paring. Make no mistake, I have plans for others as well, not all of them involving Twilight even! Not sure who's going to be next. After the next chapter that is, I know what's in that. I did promise a Twilight-Celestia scene after all.
I'll go back and edit this at some point, or if they are pointed out right away. I ran through this about four times over the course of a few weeks so anything I missed I probably won't see anytime soon.
I noticed that you've got my problem, vlad. Every once in a while i slip into present tense from past. The story i'm writing (my first, still unreleased as of now, ) is up past 19k words, but i also have some major editing to do on it. For that exact reason, and sometimes i accidentally words in sentences.
3443881 I sometimes do it in my normal speech if I'm not careful, why it's so prevalent in my writing. I tend to "read out" my stories as I write them to try and find mistakes but it doesn't help much when my brain doesn't register "No, wait, that's not right" in the first place!
If anyone points out something wrong I'll fix it up right away. Edits are quick, and would probably help me keep my mind on the story for the update. Today was just a bust day so bed is sounding really good soon... .
loved it.
A few spelling errors or wrong words but easily readable
I like.
Also: First
excellent chapter! what spelling/grammatical errors there were were few and far between.
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Glad it was enjoyable. From what "plans" have been made for this story Twilight-Rarity seems to "main" paring. Make no mistake, I have plans for others as well, not all of them involving Twilight even! Not sure who's going to be next. After the next chapter that is, I know what's in that. I did promise a Twilight-Celestia scene after all.
I'll go back and edit this at some point, or if they are pointed out right away. I ran through this about four times over the course of a few weeks so anything I missed I probably won't see anytime soon.
Thanks for the comments.
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I noticed that you've got my problem, vlad. Every once in a while i slip into present tense from past. The story i'm writing (my first, still unreleased as of now, ) is up past 19k words, but i also have some major editing to do on it. For that exact reason, and sometimes i accidentally words in sentences.
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Not quite.
Edit - If you want vlad, i can try to point some of those errors out later. I'm just a little busy at the moment dealing with schoolwork.
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I sometimes do it in my normal speech if I'm not careful, why it's so prevalent in my writing. I tend to "read out" my stories as I write them to try and find mistakes but it doesn't help much when my brain doesn't register "No, wait, that's not right" in the first place!
If anyone points out something wrong I'll fix it up right away. Edits are quick, and would probably help me keep my mind on the story for the update. Today was just a bust day so bed is sounding really good soon... .