The party had been good, Reflected Applejack, there weren't any pranks and everyone seemed to have a fun time. That was the day before now the orange earth pony was in her orchard harvesting some apples. She had never been a big part with the Gilda 'issue' and hadn't really gotten what was going on, but the party was still a nice break from her life on the farm.
But it was now back to the grind. Applejack was strolling though, just taking in her orchard. She suddenly heard something that sounded like crunching. The farmer stopped walking, the noise continued almost directly above her head. Applejack looked up, just to get a ton of apple cores dumped on her face.
"What in the hey?" Applejack rubbed her head and took a couple steps back to look in the tree. What she saw there amazed her.
There, in the tree, with a bright red apple in her mouth, sat Pinkie Pie. She saw Applejack and her blue eyes got wide. The party pony quickly spit out the apple in her mouth in a hurry. "Applejack! I'm so sorry for being in your orchard and..."
"PINKIE!" Applejack called up, interrupting her friend. "What in the hay do ya think yur doin'? Why in Celestia's name did you eat my apples?"
The pink pony stared at the ground below her and at Applejack's angry and confused face. "I guess it does look like I ate your apples doesn't it?"
"LOOK LIKE IT?" Applejack hollered, she calmed her voice down a little before continuing. "Pinkie Pie, you had an apple in your mouth."
Blue eyes widened even more, "I did, didn't I? But I didn't put it there or eat your apples. Gilda did it."
"Gilda?" Applejack asked confused. "How in the hay would Gilda be able to eat my apples and leave without me noticein."
"She flew of when the apple cores fell on you." Pinkie explained as if it were the simplest thing in the world.
"I thought you were on good terms with Gilda and didn't hate her anymore." Applejack said shaking her head.
"I did too! And I never hated her. I don't like her anymore though because she ate all your apples."
Applejack shook her head again, "Just don't eat anymore of my apples Pinkie, they cost a lot of money to grow." she said before walking off.
"But I didn't eat them!" Pinkie called after her, but Applejack either didn't hear her or chose to ignored her.
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Fluttershy was gathering bunnies. It was there bath time and the rabbits really didn't like taking a bath. Some how they always new when the bath was coming (Angle Bunny probably told them) and were very hard to round up. So Fluttershy had been chasing around bunnies almost all afternoon. She had just finished gathering them and was urging them towards there bath when suddenly a loud roar disturbed the silence and sent the rabbits fleeing in all directions. Just after that there came the sound of giggling.
Fluttershy looked around and saw Pinkie Pie on her back, laughing. "Pinkie Pie." Fluttershy said her voice a quiver.
The pink pony instantly stopped laughing when she heard Fluttershy.
"Oh Pinkie. That wasn't very funny, or nice, it took me so long to gather those bunnies." Fluttershy said her voice sad.
"Fluttershy, I'm so sorry I was laughing. I didn't scare your bunnies and I wasn't laughing at that it was....."
Fluttershy didn't listen to anymore, she went back to gathering up the bunnies, knowing it would take most of the day. Why did Pinkie have to be mean for a laugh? The yellow Pegasus wondered.
Both the chapters are really short, sorry. I just didn't know what else to put. I don't know if the other chapters will be that short or not. My gamer is probably terrible, so just bare with me.
Grammer. And i agree it could use some work.
However i do look forward to what you have planned for this.
NEVER MAKE CHAPTERS OF LESS THAN 1000 WORDS, seriously you won't receive any punishment for making long chapters.
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Except it's "grammar" and not "grammer".
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You can say that again.
One of my stories had a single chapter at 12k words.
Day one it had 3 likes and 5 dislikes.
So I split it into multiple chapters (6 to be exact)
Day two it had 9 likes and 9 dislikes.
And today it have 13 likes and 11 dislikes. (As well as 12 Favourites)
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See? How every you spell it, I really suck.
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I'll try to make the others longer, I promise (I should just combine these two chapters, shouldn't I?)
I Have NEVER Had So Many Views In Such A Short Amount Of Time!
Cool story, let's see where it goes.
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Thanks for that advice. I did want to put a little more dialogue in but couldn't think of any. Dash forgiving Gila so fast WAS given a lot of thought. I personally think that Dash really didn't want Gilda to be a jerk, she probably had a hard time deciding to abandon her. I think Dash would jump at the chance to right wrongs and such. I am very thankful for the advice though and other people have commented, just on the other page. Thanks though, It is really great to have someone do what you did!
This is very rushed.
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Ya, it sort of just scratched her, enough for her to notice but not for it to hurt. And I'm REALLY sorry it's rushed, I guess I sort of didn't think this part out enough. Grrrrrr. I'll try to do better I promise!