Dusk watched her go. Yeah, she is attracted to me. She even has her tail up, showing off her goods. A bit of a push, and she’ll be in my bed soon.

You really are heading there, but then again they sound like angry couples.

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Is love ever a straight line?

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No it not they always say opposite attract one another

Whoo-hoo! I'm over five hundred views! I need a Pinkie Party!

Thanks to all whom have read my little tale!

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You write really interesting story that why you have that many, hope more people read it too

I really hope that this dusk shine and Temple Shadow meet and get it on

loving the story so far. i cant stop checking back every day to see if there is more to read.

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It is a slow process for me. I'm not a wprdsmith, just a fanboi...

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Do you mean Tempest Shadow? Now that would be an interesting ship! And they would "meet", not eat meat!
(Sorry, my internal Twilight came out to be didactic about how another talks...)

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Don't worry princess Twilight I fixed it👍. I just thought it would be pretty awesome if Dusk Shine and Tempest shadow have one of those moments where they're arguing or something and just f*** already kind of moments or they both just have seriously hate bonus for each other.

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Damn, that sounds like a story in itself there...

No, my idea regarding that last chapter was to show that while both Twilight and Dusk may look the same, they are two totally different characters with differing backgrounds.

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oh i know, but it wont stop me. loving the story so far and cant wait to see what more is to come! keep up the great work.

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Could you say that in English please? I no habla Espanol