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“THIS IS THE POLICE PULL OVER AT ONCE!” Behind the two pursuing cars was a police car with its sirens fully blazing.

Twilight turned in her seat to see the action behind her, her face holding a tinge of hope.

Then next thing she knew it was shattered.

It happened so fast, one moment the police car was hot on the rear end of one of the cars and the next said car JUMPED out of her view.

PHEW!

The sound of energy was all Twilight could recognise before the police car exploded in a fiery inferno, the culprit driving through the flames a second later leaving the car and its former occupants far behind.

“Sweet. Lady. Liberty.” Fowler says they both stared at the scene behind them.

Welp, that was the first human casualties in the first chapter!? Damn!

While Fowler's reaction is justified. I'm surprised that the "pacifist/friendship is magic" Twilight didn't react more horribly of witnessing death for the first time like that so casually.

“Whilst it is true that we shouldn’t have the humans involved in our war we both also know that with Megatron in charge it would be only a matter of time until he had the humans involved either as an ally or as an enemy. There’s also the fact that those Decepticons were specifically after that human female, and we must know why.” With that the Prime got up to the top of the gully before transforming and drove away down the highway back to Canterlot.

Humans as a "Ally"? With the Decepticons!? Pfft, yeah right. 😑

We all know how Megatron and his nasty goons treat "lower organic life forms" like us.

Optimus, don't be gullible.

She sighed “ I’d best tell Princess about this but- ”

IF the secret "twist" is at the princesses somehow know about cybertronians. Despite cybertronians being tens of millions of years older than the princesses themselves.

I will cringe.

He then walked over to a computer and began typing “As you all know about an Earth year ago we were all awoken from our stasis by a massive discharge of energy that has so far not been recorded as far as our records claimed.”

Coincidence!!??

So technically, all this is ALL Sunset's fault?

“My research has led me to believe that the energy in question is not of our dimension and that it appears that it at least is compatible with the energies of the Matrix, which would explain that one human’s episode when she made contact with prime.” The Autobots chief science officer explained as the two wavelengths were highlighted and placed over one another.

Seriously? The elements being "compared" to a matrix of leadership?

Highly doubtful, because the Matrix itself has way more better feats than the elements of "friendship/harmony" ever could.

“She appears in much of the local media alongside six other humans, one of which had actually heh “brought” Bumblebee.” Fixit said, chuckling at the thought whilst also bringing up a series of images showing Twilight and the Wondercolts plus Sunset in the Rainbooms.

Classic Bumblebee of being bought by a new human partner.

“Hmm.” Celestia hummed after Twilight finished her tale “The presence of these “Robots” as you call them is indeed a concern and they could very much be a threat to both our worlds if left unchecked.”

Well duh. It won't take a genius to know the highly potential threat.

Hopefully you can tell the difference between the good guys ( Autobots ) and the really evil bad guys ( Decepticons ).

The ship itself is called the Nemesis, once a mere line ship in the Decepticons 4th Armada 7th Fleet 45th Squadron now the mobile Headquarters of Decepticon operations on Earth.

But it is secretly the permanent transformation warship state of the once-powerful Trypticon.

Once she was out of sight however her small smile dropped before a familiar voice called out. “Was it truly necessary dear sister to lie to her?”

Turning around facing a darkened corner of the room the Princess of the Sun stood face to face with her counterpart Luna the Princess of the Moon who walked slowly out of the shadows.

“Yes Luna and I do wish it wasn’t so but if what he said was true and only she can survive it without endangering the other side… I don’t want to burden her as much as I am already.” Celestia said with a solemn tone.

“I still find this all hard to believe sister, were it not for the fact that SHE was with him I would have not given his warning more than a mere glance. Even then though the fact that all this foreboding news hinges on the chance encounter with young Twilight and this “Last Prime” fills me with utter disbelief.” Luna said trotting up to her sister.

“You should know well by now Lulu that I take the safety of our subjects very seriously no matter the crisis whether it is real or not.” The older Alicorn sister replied with more force than she had intended.

Adopting a look of concern on her face Luna then said “Will you tell her the truth?”

“Only if the worst comes to pass, if what he said doesn’t materialise then I have no reason why I should burden Twilight with the truth of something that does not exist.” Her sister replied.

Sighing Luna began retreating back into the shadows and into the dream realm but not before saying “Very well sister, Sun’s gaze keep you safe.”

Smiling as her sister left Celestia replied “Moon’s light watch over you as well dear Luna”.

Who's "he" and "she" are they on about?

P.S. What Celestia has said;

“You should know well by now Lulu that I take the safety of our subjects very seriously no matter the crisis whether it is real or not.” The older Alicorn sister replied with more force than she had intended.

Is pure freaking BS!!!

She didn't do anything when Luna/Nightmare Moon came back. Or with Discord, or Chrysalis/Changeling Army in the Canterlot Wedding Fiasco. Sombra in the Crystal Empire, and especially didn't do much against Tirek, Starlight, Shadow Pony/Stygian, or the Strom King/Tempest.

Just let all that heavy burden go to her "precious" student, and her band of friends to take care of everything.

There are all just regular civilians ( Until one become royalty. ) that coincidentally being the bearers of a powerful Deus Ex Machina.

The only reason they "succeeded" every single time, is pure dumb luck and plot armor.

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Any reason why you quoted so much?

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Read the edit again.

I was in a hurry irl, and I didn't have enough time to write my thoughts on each of the quotes/sentences I put in.

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I see.

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Now I'm done.

One question, how did the vehicon call out for 'the princess' before the 'Cons knew of her (see Megatron/Soundwave converation) ...

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Well I haven’t watched the episodes all that often even before I started writing so I wouldn’t know about all that Dumb luck and plot Armor.

Also the he and she would be spoilers.

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Fowler said “Get back Princess” soooo….

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That explains the title but not why they wanted her then, after all, when Megatron was reviewing the video, it showing Twi leaving by the portal, not coming in by the portal ... (why interact with Twi/Fowler at all at that point, because she got close to Optimus?)

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You make a good point and I wish I had a good enough answer but I don’t.

It's not worth reading

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Why if I may ask? Because unless you have a good reason to actually post your thoughts you should really keep them to yourself and not read my story then instead of trying to sway others to your way of thinking.

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Made a few edits in response to your comment, what do you think?

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Nice, thanks.