I appreciate any constructive feedback and I would love to hear what you "the reader" thinks about the story and actions.

i like it how she Uses the Queen in S and M to make the agent confess to beg for more i hope you have them beg her to make them love her

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Thank you for your feedback.

Mars Blaze got lots of love that the queen WILL drain from him. At first only tainted love, but later also more regular love since he will become just another simp in her steady growing army

Makes me wonder why she did not do this instead of the invasion she would have gotten alot of willing followers this way

Wonder if there will be some canon followers to her rule. Probably not the sun princess, but imagine that as a guilty pleasure hahaah

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While I can't really say they will be directly involved in any porn or sex scene, they will probably appear in either the next chapter or in the future with a role to play 😉

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Looking forward to it! In anyway there is involvement! (Secretly hoping for someone’s nose to be touched by the mighty chrysalis but I’ll keep hoovsies crossed for that every story I read lol)

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Closest you get to that is the final scene of chapter one with her holding his cheeks.

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That would require her to be remotely intelligent. (This particular implementation requires the internet to exist, but bronies have been saying that she should have just started a brothel for over a decade. Because yes, that episode is more than 10 years old. )

At this rate she will win, legion of subscribers outgrowing the royal guard.
The only force that can possibly stop her now is the Equestrian IRS, because not even Joker will mess with tax evasion.
Lovely tension and pacing.

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