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What a wonderful job with this one. You did an awesome job fleshing out what caused the rift between Celestia and Luna, and provided a great history which doesn't have either Celestia or Luna be purely victim or villain. Similarly, the development between Luna and Daedalus feels really solid and is a lot of fun to see. You're kicking ass with this one, looking forward to the next chapter!
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Thank you, I appreciate it! I know that, overall, it was pretty short but I thought I did pretty good for just under 4k words, so I'm glad to hear that. I definitely rewrote this more than once when originally writing it
Just found and binged this, its really good! Thanks for writing it!
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Thank you, I appreciate that!