Another great, and sweet chapter. Looks like Lyra really likes flirting with Bon Bon and with them having sleepover they all have a lot more time to get to know each other. Happy Bon Bon seemed to enjoy Star Wars, I really need to check out Titanic myself.
11606353 You are certainly welcome. By the by, I love the subtle flirting going on between Bonny and Lyra, here. Somebody's going to get very twitterpated, soon!
Also, I quite enjoy your portrayal of Vinyl. Is she going to be canon mute (as shown in the show), or just an non-communicative aphasiac? The reason I ask is because, I myself, deal with with social anxiety, manifesting as aphasia, unless I'm writing. But talking is very hard.
All said, this has become one of my Starred stories. Well written and relatable. Nice to see the background characters get a good write up. And yeah, I'd be crushing hard on a raven-haired uber-cellist with a slaying British accent. Yorks, especially. I'm really curious to see how Scratch pursues her, and if it helps her aphasia (if that's how you intend to write her – having her being a mute is certainly interesting, as well). Ah, all of the brill character development opportunities, here!
11606361 I like that way of thinking, dude. I feel her being quiet fits with her also being more reserved, calm, and introverted than most, plus I kinda prefer this take on Vinyl more than most fanfics I've read.
so Bon bon's from trottingham? interesting. Suppose she could have met pip., little joke
Another great, and sweet chapter. Looks like Lyra really likes flirting with Bon Bon and with them having sleepover they all have a lot more time to get to know each other. Happy Bon Bon seemed to enjoy Star Wars, I really need to check out Titanic myself.
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Another good movie is Ghost Ship. It's a bit of a horror movie in certain areas but great
Really enjoying this,
though I must point out you seem to have twoChapter VIIs listed!Keep up the great work.11606348
Oh shit. Thanks for pointing that out lol
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You are certainly welcome. By the by, I love the subtle flirting going on between Bonny and Lyra, here. Somebody's going to get very twitterpated, soon!
Also, I quite enjoy your portrayal of Vinyl. Is she going to be canon mute (as shown in the show), or just an non-communicative aphasiac? The reason I ask is because, I myself, deal with with social anxiety, manifesting as aphasia, unless I'm writing. But talking is very hard.
All said, this has become one of my Starred stories. Well written and relatable. Nice to see the background characters get a good write up. And yeah, I'd be crushing hard on a raven-haired uber-cellist with a slaying British accent. Yorks, especially. I'm really curious to see how Scratch pursues her, and if it helps her aphasia (if that's how you intend to write her – having her being a mute is certainly interesting, as well). Ah, all of the brill character development opportunities, here!
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Thank you kindly for the kind words. She's not going to be mute, she's just going to be very quiet around strangers and in general
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I like that way of thinking, dude. I feel her being quiet fits with her also being more reserved, calm, and introverted than most, plus I kinda prefer this take on Vinyl more than most fanfics I've read.