Once again you are forgetting the comma before someone speaks.
left with a deliciously dark shade of eye shadow to create a perfect contrast and brought out the shine of her eyes.
Sunbeam emptied her spoon then refilled it with a quarter as much food as before, Stellar could see the light of the end of the tunnel, when it came down to it there wasn't a whole lot to table manners and it certainly wasn't difficult. Sunbeam picked up her drink when her mother said "Ah, final lesson, whenever you pick up a drink you must have your elbow out, pinkie flexed and most important of all... sip, don't slurp. There shouldn't be any noise whenever a liquid enters your mouth"
"Stop, you've made a mistake already,(——“ Sunbeam looked to her mother for an answer,
she hadn't even needed to to point out any mistakes with the mascara or eyeliner,
I digress however, get sucking bitch.(——"
Once again they went to the same place as last time for all their accessory needs,
Once again you are forgetting the comma before someone speaks.