Amazingly hot, one element down.

She was still a scant few inches away from her cock, but she soon made a ruinous error - she took a long, deep breath through her nose. In an instant, her sinuses were flooded with his natural scent and the frosting he had put on the top of his cock. Earthy met sweet, the scent of a proper male encouraging her lust alongside the delectable aroma the frosting provided.

Is she packing or...

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I don’t know how I missed these typos. Thank you for pointing it out.

Honestly I can't wait for the princesses to become part of the herd

pink blob that can use magic? It's a select group that I know exists, but my first candidate is Celestia, and if I remember correctly, that book appeared out of nowhere... so... well, it's not unreasonable to think that there was a previous teacher, who had to Celestia, and on her deathbed she ordered something before leaving her physical body...

Either that or Anon traveled back in time and that's how she gained control over Celestia.

A grief chill ran up his spine upon hearing her call him Anon, something she never did, but he quickly shoved the feeling aside and replied. “Pardon?”

Typo.

Adorning his mediocre acting facade, Anon raised his hands innocently and smiled at the mare. “Okay, okay! You got me, I might’ve did an iiiity biiiity amount of lying~”

Found another. I'm fairly confident that "done" would fit here better.