Perhaps it's Fate that all Shirou's become a cynical Archer, or that's what Shirou thought as he beheld his end. Fortunately for him, Fate could be quite tricky and Twilight Sparkle just happened to be looking in the right place to summon a Hero.
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Simply amazing in my opinion and i really hope you continue this story.
Ok, so, I realize that MLP made the mane 6 friends near immediately, but I still feel like this is speed running the relationship with shirou by getting immediately into all his trauma, it's fine to get into his magic, or hell, to even ask about his trauma, but normally people wait a bit to show they've thought about it before commenting on it or saying that they're wrong about how they interpret their own trauma, especially a trauma they weren't personally involved in nor can relate to.
Also, I don't honestly know if Twilight would be as passionate and empathetic as she is here at the start of the show, it almost feels like she's being influenced by magic to focus on shirou.
Sorry if this seems harsh I just am having trouble putting what my problem is with the relationship pacing to words.
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Remember that twilight got a lot of glimpses into Shirou past and vice versa, so they have more knowledge of each other.
Also Harmony may have a hand in getting things along faster, is this practically deus ex? Maybe but this is an in world explanation.