11066702 i agree with this like she was just put in to fill a random world building role and nothing else at the beginning and Izak is going to have a really odd time starting now with all he is going to learn
Came back to this story to see if something finally happened, and the only thing I can say is that I'm filled with nothing but dissapointment. Judging by the extended conversation you had with OP Omni God-Emperor Doom, you didn't even read my comment.
You need to add more red tags, specifically the MLP: FIM,Fetish and Non-con tag, and you need to evolve your summary and add warnings. Because it is nothing but false advertisment.
I've seen this story in groups that it does not belong in, this is because of the tags and summary. Despite you calling it a crossover fic, it's not. Izak might as well be named Anon and nothing would change.
At least, add warnings in the summary. This fic contains: giant mares, futa on female, slavery, domination, mindbreak, huge cocks, body deformation, suffocation, unreasonable amount of cum, etc.
This is not a crossover fic, it's a clopfic with a human as a backround character.
I agree with your Author Note on Candace
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i agree with this like she was just put in to fill a random world building role and nothing else at the beginning and Izak is going to have a really odd time starting now with all he is going to learn
Came back to this story to see if something finally happened, and the only thing I can say is that I'm filled with nothing but dissapointment. Judging by the extended conversation you had with OP Omni God-Emperor Doom, you didn't even read my comment.
You need to add more red tags, specifically the MLP: FIM,Fetish and Non-con tag, and you need to evolve your summary and add warnings. Because it is nothing but false advertisment.
I've seen this story in groups that it does not belong in, this is because of the tags and summary. Despite you calling it a crossover fic, it's not. Izak might as well be named Anon and nothing would change.
At least, add warnings in the summary.
This fic contains: giant mares, futa on female, slavery, domination, mindbreak, huge cocks, body deformation, suffocation, unreasonable amount of cum, etc.
This is not a crossover fic, it's a clopfic with a human as a backround character.