nice work

11047588
Thanks!

Yes, this is perfect reading material

I hope Rarity is ready because she just awaken a sleeping giant and filled it with a terrible resolve...

I like this. Nice work!

11047847
There are two reasons why Rarity is behind this. The one that actually has to do with the story is her first surname, “Avellino.”
The other reason is because of a certain trope. You know, the cliche of Rainbow Dash being the one to set up an attack on Sunset, most often in the school gym. I figured that Rarity might make more sense. She would most likely have quite a few connections to people, which could give her the resources needed to do something like this. Well, she obviously has connections, given her “Avellino” surname. Plus, I can see Rarity being involved with a bunch of well-off, “classy” Italian businessmen who “happen to also run a crime syndicate.”

What a twist! I love it! Keep up the good work!

11047953
interesting like a Mafia type of hit. That is really cool! Nice work

11048180
Thank you.

11048447
no problem