I like that cute picture of Naruto you have as the cover pic.

Wait a minute... *squints*

That's just a normal fox!

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Hahahahaha got em

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its like the effect with perry the platapus

OP main characters OP Check
likely harem incoming Check
Reading this as it comes out check

"Pfft she'll love you!" Placing his hand on the fox's shoulder the two teleported away in a blink leaving the guards to report to twilight about this 'fox spirit'.

Okay?! WHY should you let Twilight be involved? Clearly, our Fox Character obviously didn't do any shit here. The main problem is that the "Chef" has F****** Anger Problems. And the Guards are very Incompetent, STILL Racist/Xenophobic ( Despite Equestria now having NON-PONIES as Citizens), Morons!!!!!!

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Have you ever heard of a cat with nine lives will guess what I'm a fox with nine tails yeah come get some

Why can I imagine the MC reacting to regular foxes like Sebastian did to cats in Black Butler?

Great chapter hahaha I cannot wait for the next chapter

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Something like this:

Few misspellings, look for *pasted out* and turn it to past out.

*As the waitress placed down his meal, he thanked he* change that he to him. Pretty sure there might be a few more but needz toz getz somez sleepz

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I was more referring to keeping them hoarded in a wardrobe, but that works.

Me gustó mucho la historia⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

You planing on having him be a nine tailed kitsune or a tenko?

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Tell me about it! You would think that shit would go but this is ponies and many would still have those ideals

Ah another chapter and no surprise pony food, besides the sweet stuff, is crap and ponies thinking their top of the food chain even thou now they have different races among them. I just hope we see some non pony guards and that not all pony guards are incompetent morons. Wonder how his meeting with Fluttershy goes and who else he will meet

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Seriously?! Even after having Non-Pony Races join Equestria. Along with the Friendship School and all. Some Ponies ( especially the Pony Guards) are STILL Racist/Xenophobic Morons!

I think our Fox here should "demonstrate" his OP Power, and that will fear them to LEAVE HIM alone, or ELSE!

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Indeed he should, like say a huge monster attacks and he vaporize it effortlessly right in front of the town

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Good idea.

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Thanks

Connotcrooper I'm gonna ask you straight, why do you stop so many stories and drop them I've book marked so many of your stories and just the next day they are deleted is it because you don't like any more you don't have to make the perfect story just make a good one but until then i just can read you stories any more

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Alright I'll be straight... yes in a way I'm striving to make things better on my stories whether if I see my story as bad or awful, then there are those people who dislike it either because of them not liking the idea or this one guy... who was he?

...hold on...

This guy here...

See when someone places your story on a bookshelf saying: 'the worst story I ever seen', it hurts.

And when I asked him about it...well...

Quote: "Because it glorifies gore and death. Please do NOT reply to this message, because I will ignore you"

One I don't "glorified" death and gore in my stories I put them in there because some of my stories are based on dark series (Warhammer 40k, fallout, and halo), and two I haven't had the best last years of my childhood after my step-father came into the picture and along with him trying any way to throw me in jail or hurt me kind scars one's mind.

Sorry I'm still soured over what this guy did back on topic, another reason is... stress like I said my step-father is hard on me and not just him my mom can't stand me snapping to her 'one true love' along with my HALF sister saying 'Your not my brother anymore' when I stand up to myself. I love writing these stories I really do and sometimes my life f**ks that up. It hurts even worse when some guy is like... oh this story sounds dumb and I'm not going to read it and hit the dislike button, sure I had some bad stories but I'm always trying to get better somehow. And when a story comes and hits me I grab onto it for dear life and see where it takes me.

Sorry if this isn't the answer you were looking for... but don't worry the whole reason why I haven't been updating is because of me studying day and night (It's 1:53 right now) for my AVASB test for the US military to get out of this hellhole while trying to get a job so I can pay my 600 US rent that my mom is having me pay, its kinda hard to update stories...

I have to plan for this one since it involves my favorite Japanese yokai and some of my favorite series, hell I'm having to stall on a cyberpunk idea I got after watching some videos and playing the game myself.

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Sorry to hear about what is going on in your life. Good luck with your family problems and I hope it will get better. Don’t listen to those negative people.

Maybe this will cheer you up a little but I have please nerf and the protogen of equis in my favorites.

Think the tilt should be pls nerf
think it would be funnier

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