10653107 Sunrise is very close to her parents, so she fears losing them. It's my way of showing how much she loves them and cares about them, and in turn how much they love and care about her.
I've made Sunset in this story gentle and motherly, as well as protective to show the bond between parent and child.
Interesting. Except in Deadpool's defense. He was actually trying to greet and act nice to Sunset and their Kid. And all James did is go Crazy Overprotective Mode, when Deadpool didn't do nothing wrong against Sunset and their Kid.
One, I know which Chapter I'm talking about: Chapter 5. Two, I always comment outside the story, and not inside the chapters themselves. So, my comments mostly go to the updated chapter so far.
It's okay. And while I was a little upset at Sunrise, that she didn't put too much trust to James and Sunset that they will Never abandon or abuse her. It's nice that they prove her wrong.
10654058 She does trust them, she's just really worried about losing them. She loves them too much. The story was supposed to show a family element, and the quote by Charles Xavier hints that.
"This is what life looks like, a home, people who love each other, safe place. You should take a moment, and feel it, you still have time.”
10654058 And they're her parents, of course they'd prove her wrong by showing that they love her. Sunset still tucking her in to bed and singing to her every night is my way of showing that it's helped their bond by keeping them connected.
ok. that really tugged a lot of hart strings.
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Sunrise is very close to her parents, so she fears losing them. It's my way of showing how much she loves them and cares about them, and in turn how much they love and care about her.
I've made Sunset in this story gentle and motherly, as well as protective to show the bond between parent and child.
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that's very well done dude.
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She fears losing her parents, it's not like how young children get that closely attached, however it may look like it. But it is not.
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that i know. i'm still close with my dad.
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Interesting. Except in Deadpool's defense. He was actually trying to greet and act nice to Sunset and their Kid. And all James did is go Crazy Overprotective Mode, when Deadpool didn't do nothing wrong against Sunset and their Kid.
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What do you think of this chapter?
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wrong chapter man.
this is chapter 6, that was from chapter 5.
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One, I know which Chapter I'm talking about: Chapter 5. Two, I always comment outside the story, and not inside the chapters themselves. So, my comments mostly go to the updated chapter so far.
So, sorry then?
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Sorry, made a mistake with my statement.
I admit, I was wrong.
But what do you think of Chapter 6?
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It's okay. And while I was a little upset at Sunrise, that she didn't put too much trust to James and Sunset that they will Never abandon or abuse her. It's nice that they prove her wrong.
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She does trust them, she's just really worried about losing them. She loves them too much. The story was supposed to show a family element, and the quote by Charles Xavier hints that.
"This is what life looks like, a home, people who love each other, safe place. You should take a moment, and feel it, you still have time.”
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And they're her parents, of course they'd prove her wrong by showing that they love her. Sunset still tucking her in to bed and singing to her every night is my way of showing that it's helped their bond by keeping them connected.
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And for one thing, James is overprotective because he's Sunrise's father. Of course he'd be overprotective.