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Published 10th Jun 2020
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Alicorn of the dark soul - Silas5399

What if the Ashen one never collected the soul of the slave knight Gael

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Broddrick #1 · Jun 10th, 2020 · 1 · ·

A very rushed sex scene with no build up to it. Gotta work on your pacing dude.

Silas5399 #2 · Jun 11th, 2020 · · ·

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Sorry but I was stuck on that chapter for awhile, and I just wanted to get it done

Broddrick #3 · Jun 11th, 2020 · · ·

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In my opinion, if you stuck on a sex scene then it might be best to put it off to later chapters and focus on the main story instead. The story has potential but you just need to pace yourself better and focus on the world building.

Jamesonboo22 #4 · Jun 12th, 2020 · · ·

Please continue

Silas5399 #5 · Jun 12th, 2020 · · ·

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I will

DarkKing2 #6 · Jun 14th, 2020 · · ·

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