While I praise you for making this unique and the beginning different, I can't say same on how our guy (MC) is gonna find out his history, while I like this it doesn't really fit with the MC being a former king and all of that (going by the description) but hey I shall read on and see how it goes
That was an interesting opening chapter. I love and applaud the concept as set out in the A/N. Though it seems like a story that would only have the MC and other OCs. I look forward to seeing how this story develops and how the characters you tagged are able to come into the story. I have an idea on that last one but I'm not sure if it's right. It'll be fun to see it regardless. Keep up the good work.
If he's Cain does that mean that the antidiluvians as well as Christianity and The Lord Almighty exist as well, unless the great flood never happened in which case we can rule out antidiluvians.
10257457 uh sorry it's been a while since ive played the game so my history if fuzzy but in this story the other nations in the time he ruled are separate from any religious group more like a hierarchy far before the 'Great formation' of the three main equine races and other races...
So the ponies are at war with each other with the other races are in the mix as well, As for my OC he was 'THE' First ruler to unify any of two races let alone all of them...and the other nations hated him for it due to some speculation that he could send spies and ruin their rule, and he was powerful and very smart so he was a threat...so in a desperate attempt to end the rising power of The Raven Unity...well i'll add that to the story soon enough.
While I praise you for making this unique and the beginning different, I can't say same on how our guy (MC) is gonna find out his history, while I like this it doesn't really fit with the MC being a former king and all of that (going by the description) but hey I shall read on and see how it goes
That was an interesting opening chapter. I love and applaud the concept as set out in the A/N. Though it seems like a story that would only have the MC and other OCs. I look forward to seeing how this story develops and how the characters you tagged are able to come into the story. I have an idea on that last one but I'm not sure if it's right. It'll be fun to see it regardless. Keep up the good work.
If he's Cain does that mean that the antidiluvians as well as Christianity and The Lord Almighty exist as well, unless the great flood never happened in which case we can rule out antidiluvians.
10257457
uh sorry it's been a while since ive played the game so my history if fuzzy but in this story the other nations in the time he ruled are separate from any religious group more like a hierarchy far before the 'Great formation' of the three main equine races and other races...
So the ponies are at war with each other with the other races are in the mix as well, As for my OC he was 'THE' First ruler to unify any of two races let alone all of them...and the other nations hated him for it due to some speculation that he could send spies and ruin their rule, and he was powerful and very smart so he was a threat...so in a desperate attempt to end the rising power of The Raven Unity...well i'll add that to the story soon enough.