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Starting Line Part 1

Author's Note:

Hello everyone I hope you in jay my first story here on Fimfiction.

Thank you.

The sound of bolts being screwed into place echo throw out the garage. It's soul occupant twisting the last bolt into place. Happy there work was finish they rolled themselves out from under there car and stud up to admire there work.

" Okay the new fuel line is in place. Lets give you a test drive and see how it holds up." said the car's owner.

As they walk to car door they stop to adjust the side mirror. In the mirror's reflection was a young girl crimson and gold heir with teal eyes and amber skin. She wore a magenta t-shirt with a red and yellow sun in the center and a simple pair of blue jeans. Her name is Sunset Shimmer and she was ready to ride. She enter the car and start the engine. With a might roar the car's engine came to life. Sunset hit the garage door remote to open the doors. While the doors slowly open Sunset comely listen to the car's engine as purred.

" Alright here we go." Sunset said as the doors finish opening. Once open Sunset shifted into drive and hit the gas. The car shot out of the garage like a bullet out of a gun. Soon Sunset found herself fling across the salt flats with great speed.

" Oh yeah, these are some hot wheels!" Sunset said excitement.

Sunset was so in thrilled with how fast she was going that she almost didn't hear the police siren coming from behind her. She look to her left to see a police curser pulling up beside her. The window rolled down showing a man with white skin and two tone blue hair. He wore a police uniform with a pair of sunglasses covering his eyes.

" Pull over Shimmer your speeding." The officer commanded.

" Sorry sheriff Armor it's not against the law if I'm on the salt flats. And according to my speedometer I'm doing the speed limit." Sunset said. She then pointed forwards and said "Cactus." before pulling away.

Sheriff Armor look forwards and hit his brakes it time to not hit the cactus. He then clime out of his curser and called out " Shimmer your going now were fast."

Chuckling Sunset continued to drive on. After a short period of driving Sunset spotted something in the destone. She quickly stop so she could get a better look. Off in the destone was some sort of twister.

"Hu that's strange." Sunset said before she started to smile. " And around here that as closes as it gets to fun." As she drove towards the twister.

When Sunset entered the twister her car's wheels started to glow red. The next thing that happen was the car was lifted off the ground. Sunset struggled to keep her car steady from all the shacking. Soon a bright light shine over the car forcing sunset to cover her eyes. The next thing she know was her car was thrown out of a bright blue vortex and landed with a large thud. Back on solid ground Sunset got out of her car to see were she was.

" Were in the world." Stun as look around her " NO the universe am I?"

Sunset was shock at what she saw around her. She sat against the back tiers of her car trying not to believe what she was seeing. "You have to be dreaming Shimmer. Yeah this has to be a dream." She rube her eyes and look around again. " Nope not a dream." Then a loud sound caught her attention, making her look to the vortex. She saw that it was closing and panic.

"Oh no! It closing." Sunset said as ran to the vortex. She jump trying to make it through, but it close making her hit the ground. " No!" Sunset scream out as she look to were vortex once was. Sunset sat there not sure what she was going to do now. But she didn't get time to dwell on it, as she heard something approaching.

" Help!" Someone cried out.

Sunset look towards the dracone the voice came from. She crawled over to the near by ledge to see what was going on. What she saw was something she didn't expect to see. Laying on the ground was a person that was glowing a light blue with darker blue lines traveling all over there body. Standing around them were three creatures. The first one look a crocodile, he wore armor plates on his shoulders, forearms, and thigh. It also had a skull strap to it's adamant with thick leather stapes. It also look like he was blind in one eye. The second one was a shark with a light brown vest with a spikey strap going over it's chest, it also had large fish skulls on its shoulders and wore dark brown pants. The last one was some kind of bug, but Sunset didn't know what a roach maybe. It didn't ware any cloth like the other two. It's arms, legs, and lower part of its head were red. The upper part and its back were purple with a lightest blue under belly.

" Okay did I drive into some sort of SiFi movie or something?" She ask herself. Then she notes that they were grabbing something from each other. She couldn't get a good look at it, but she can see that it is a light brownies color and it was glowing slightly. Soon the sound of a vehicle approaching fallow by the sound of something roaring. Looking to her left Sunset saw what look to be a lion driving what look like a motorize chariot. He stop his chariot right in front of the group and jump out. Once out Sunset got a good look at him. He had armor plates on his thigh, lower legs, and forearms. He also had shoulder pads that had blades jetting out words being held up by a metal straps. He had armor panels running up his spine. Along with a helmet that cover most of his head. She also saw a cross bow mounted on his right arm. He walk over to the group and to the object that the three grabbing from each ether from the bug and smiled at it.

" Give me back the key Kalus." The blue person commanded to the lion now know as Kales.

" The battlekey belongs to me." Kalus said before roaring once more.

As the blue person and Kales talk Sunset look towards her car and back at them. She started walking quietly back to her car as the two continue to talk.

" I will not allow you to destroy any more worlds." said the blue person.

" You are the last of your kind, you can do nothing to stop me." Kalus said as he got in the blue person's face.

The sound of a vehicle caught the everyone's attention making turn to see a red and orange car drive towards them. The blue person us this opportunity to dive and grab the battlekey from Kalus's hand. Anger Kalus tried to take the key back, but Sunset quickly did a donut witch throw dirt and rocks at him and the other three. Sunset then push open the passenger door and said " Get In!" The person jump in as the car slide by before speeding off.

" We must flee from the portal that brought you here." They said to Sunset.

" Before we go anywhere I what some answers." Sunset ask " Who are you, what were those creatures back there and where are we?"

" Those creatures are called vandals. They are a species of savage conquerors. I am Sage a sentient and we are in a interdimensional battle zone." The person now Sage said. She then tap her wrist a hollow display appear.

" A battle what now?" Sunset ask looking at Sage.

" Battle zone one of many throughout the multiverse." Sage said.

Sunset continue to drive on, in tale she heard something coming fast behind them. She look into the rearview mirror and saw Kalus had cut up with them. He rise his arm and shot some arrows into the back of her car.

" Hey I just this thing painted!" Sunset cried out.

Then Kalus lunch the large spear head from the front of his chariot into the back of the car. This brought an angry expression onto Sunset's face.

" OK now your making me made." Sunset said before hitting the gas. This case the rope that was attached to the spear head to flip the chariot. Kalus jump as his chariot flip out from underneath him. He growled as the car continue to drive on.

" So long fur ball." Sunset said as she wave. She didn't get to far as her car started to back far.

'' Oh do you know a good garage in this wasteland? I need to make some repairs." Sunset ask Sage. Sage then tap her wrist, as the came up to a large open plan a large vehicle appear In front of them. The front then open allowing Sunset to drive in. Once inside the ramp close and turn invisible as the vandals drove by.

" What is this Thing?" Sunset ask.

" A Mobius command center. It is function as a mobile repair station, a storehouse of knowledge, as well as a power source for me." Sage answered.

" Then why don't we just ride this beast out of here? Sunset looking at Sage.

" It is damage beyond repair. Lets us hope it has enough energy to perform one last function." Sage said as she got out of the car. Sunset as well got out to she what Sage was doing. She watch as Sage floated up. Then the floor panel Sunset was standing on started to left up

" Woo hey, hey what are you doing?" Sunset ask. Sage wave her arm and a bunch of hollow display appear. Sage then brought hear hands together and an object appear in between them.

" These is a self-contained power cell that contains blueprints to upgrade your vehicle. This device will analyze you and customize the capabilities of your vehicle to your personality." Sage said as she put the power cell onto the display.

" If it means a free paint job, knock yourself out." Sunset said.

" Unfortunately all other systems will need to shut down, that including the cloaking device.'' Sage said.

Kalus park his chariot to look around with his telescope. As he was scanning the land he spotted the mobi coming out cloak.

" There, the Mobius command center.'' Kalus said.

Inside the mobi was busy at work upgrading Sunset's car. Sunset watch as her car was being taken apart and being put to gather in a new way. Just then a few hoses of some sort lower down and started spraying her with something. Soon a suit started to form over her cloth. Main body of the suit was a dark red with light orange panels on her shoulder, torso, forearms, and thighs. There were also silver bet spread over the suit. She also got a cool pair of shades with light orange fames and light blue leans.

"Oh cool." Sunset said as she look over the suit.

" A high impact g-force suit." Sage said as Sunset trace the silver five on her chest. She then saw that the mobi was done with there work. What she saw blow her away. In front of her sat her new car. It was bright red with a silver trim. There were four fins, two on each sides. Then there was the dome that cover the driver seat.

" To complete the upgrade, the bond with your machine you must name the vehicle.'' Sage told Sunset.

Sunset look at her car and can come up with only one name. "The Saber." Just then an alarm went of inside the mobi.

" Kalus and his vandals are near. The key will signal when you get close to the portal." Sage said.

" The portal is gone it doesn't exist." Sunset told Sage.

" This battle key will unlock it." Sage said as the key attached to the saber. " Once you are through take the key and lock the portal on the Earth side."

" You're coming right?" Sunset ask.

" I must travel in hibernation mode to conserve energy." Sage said. Soon Sage's body started glowing very bright. The next thing Sunset know was Sage body was suck into what look like dodecahedron witch dropped into Sunset's hand.

" Cool, alien to go.'' Sunset said before climbing into the saber.

As the vandals drove close to the mobi, the saber lunch out. Kalus blow a war horn and look to the shark and the crocodile.

" Sever, Krocomodo siege command of the mobius and stripe it of it resources." Kalus commanded. " I will pursue this sub creature."

Sunset was driving as fast as she could to head back to where the portal was. She heard a horn coming from her left and saw Kalus and the bug driving on another route. Kalus started arrows at Sunset, action fast she doge the in coming arrows. He laugh as Sunset doge his arrows.

" Hatch move in." Kalus told the bug.

Hatch laugh as he drove down a ramp after Sunset. Once he was close he started his attack.

" Feel the sting of my scarab." cried Hatch.

As Sunset look up she saw the stinger from Hatch's car coming down at her. She quickly swerve out of the way. Back at the mobi Sever and Krocomodo are fighting over a piece of machinery when the light turn red. They look over to the wall and saw a time counting down.

" Run the mobi going to blow." shouted Krocmodo, as he and Sever quickly got into there car drive out just in time. For the second they got out the mobius blow up.

Hatch was laughing as he keep trying to hit Sunset. As they continue down this road, Sunset saw rock in the shape of a ramp. She hided for it and jump off. Hatch watch as she lunch off the ramp. Sunset rotate the driving sat to look at Hatch. Hatch look up at Sunset and saw her pointing forwards. He look forward and saw he was about to hit a stone wall.

" Aaaaaaaaah" Hatch scream out as he hit the wall.

As Sunset landed she called out " So long roach boy!"

Sunset continue on her way with out trouble. But then Kalus path merge with Her and pulled up beside her.

" Did you think you could insult me and get away with it. This ends now." Kalus said.

The next thing that happen is Kalus started to ram into the side of the saber. Forcing it close to the ledge of the road. Sunset tried to pull away, but Kalus kept her on the ledge. She started think of what she could do. Then an idea came to he mind she tap the side of her new shade and they showed her some things the saber could do.

" That should work." Sunset said as she look at the car's blueprint.

She then hit a button that made the front half extends forewords. Then the front end open up the middle forming two large blades to each side of the car. The front wheels flip up wards with blades extending out of them with blue energy pushing out from the bottom of the wheels keeping the car up. She then ram into Kalus with the spinning blades, making him spin out. Sunset laugh as he tried to stop spinning. Once she know that she was far enough a way, she deactivate her weapons and continued forwards.

" Here goes nothing." Sunset said.

Then three streams of energy grab and pick up the key and lunch it forwards. Once the key hit were the portal was it open. Sunset quickly drove through it and found herself back on earth.

" I made it, wah how." Sunset cheered out. She then knots that the portal was not closing. " The stormshock."

She ran to the stormshock and saw Kalus getting close.

" Hey Sage how do I close this thing?" Sunset called out.

Then the object that contain Sage floated up and then she reappeared. "You must reach for the key, it will come to you." She said in a tired voice.

Sunset reach out and the key fallow into her hand closing the stormshock. On the other side Kalus tried to reach the portal, but it close right as he way about to go throw. He stop his chariot and roared in anger for not getting throw the portal.

" We did it! so long vandals." Sunset said in a happy tune.

" Oh" Sage said falling to her knees as her form flickered.

Sunset ran over to her and ask " Sage are you okay?"

" Each time I go throw a Stormshock it weakens me, erase a part of my memory. I have traveled far. Perhaps to far, I most hibernate.'' Sage said as she return her storage unite.

"You got to teach me that trick." Sunset said as she walk back to the saber and drove home.

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