10087233 Ok, I understand, I'll make some edits to try and make Midnight's little chit-chat with her father a lot longer and I may have to change the ending to just driving him insane instead of blasting his face into hamburger, cause I just realized that would be an act of more satisfying revenge than just killing him, I'd also have to include a torture scene.
Really amazing story so far im getting a good Joker vibe coming from midnight sparkle keep up the amazing work and cant wait how you introduce sunset
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Thank you so much, I really needed to hear something good about this story because I wanted to give a new take on the character.
It's a good idea and interesting but......It too fast, your rushing the story and just getting things over with.
it so fast and rushed..
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Ok, I understand, I'll make some edits to try and make Midnight's little chit-chat with her father a lot longer and I may have to change the ending to just driving him insane instead of blasting his face into hamburger, cause I just realized that would be an act of more satisfying revenge than just killing him, I'd also have to include a torture scene.