Anger Management Class
written by Wandering Pigeon
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I'm not entirely sure I understand. How does describing what's happening break immersion?
9784530
Forgive my stupidity, I shouldn't be making comments while falling asleep haha.
My criticism is that I find you use "pooping, pooped, and poop" a lot. I know that you're describing what's going on, but using words like messing or filling intermittently adds some much needed variety!
9784703
Yeah, that makes more sense, lol.
Took me a while to get to this one. I'm still enjoying this a great deal. I'd LOVE to try out Eris's aromatherapy by the way. Seems like fun.
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Glad to hear you're still enjoying it. The aromatheraphy part was so much fun to write.
They don't really seem to learn. They keep snarling at each other even after you say they have admitted defeat.