9699533 Oh I agree, lots of characters get their names shortened to just one word. But 'Rainbow' and 'Dash' are both nouns, they both function as 'things' in their own right, so a character being named 'Rainbow' carries an image with it already. Whereas 'More' is kind of empty in this context without something to follow it, whether that's 'More Modest' or 'More Cookies,' if you get what I mean?
9699536 Ahh, now I see your point, and you're right there. I just hate writing out longer full names and I want him to seem informal... Not that it really matters he might show up once more since this story isn't about him. I put in OCs when I need a character but I don't do OCs personally.
9699548 Hehe, well the thought process is actually meant to be muddled like that because it's literally her thinking at herself. I mean when I thought process myself my brain isn't actually another entity responding to me, it's me responding to me.
Well, I meant the diamond attack to come off more like what she did to Applejack in Everfree, only this time there was a wall instead of a lake behind her. Rarity did it after turning and finding someone she perceives as hostile right in her face, not as an active attack to hurt Adagio.
And Rarity did just see Adagio for a few days, but those few days were trying to brainwash the school and get her to fight with her friends to feed of their emotions. The magnitude of a crime is not defined by its length. (I am totally just trying to sound fancy there. :D) And I mean... I am portraying Adagio as... Very naughty in a sexual way in this fic.
9699533 Oh I agree, lots of characters get their names shortened to just one word. But 'Rainbow' and 'Dash' are both nouns, they both function as 'things' in their own right, so a character being named 'Rainbow' carries an image with it already. Whereas 'More' is kind of empty in this context without something to follow it, whether that's 'More Modest' or 'More Cookies,' if you get what I mean?
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Ahh, now I see your point, and you're right there. I just hate writing out longer full names and I want him to seem informal... Not that it really matters he might show up once more since this story isn't about him. I put in OCs when I need a character but I don't do OCs personally.
Ooh, I like the idea of her manufacturing diva moments for career gain, and keeping the important people in the loop. Definitely an Adagio moment here
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Hehe, well the thought process is actually meant to be muddled like that because it's literally her thinking at herself. I mean when I thought process myself my brain isn't actually another entity responding to me, it's me responding to me.
Well, I meant the diamond attack to come off more like what she did to Applejack in Everfree, only this time there was a wall instead of a lake behind her. Rarity did it after turning and finding someone she perceives as hostile right in her face, not as an active attack to hurt Adagio.
And Rarity did just see Adagio for a few days, but those few days were trying to brainwash the school and get her to fight with her friends to feed of their emotions. The magnitude of a crime is not defined by its length. (I am totally just trying to sound fancy there. :D) And I mean... I am portraying Adagio as... Very naughty in a sexual way in this fic.