As it turned out, the office door was closed. After a few minutes, a student came out, looking worried but hopeful, and Spike went in after. Starlight was at her desk, still writing. She looked up. "What's up, Spike? Unless it's complicated, I'd like to finish writing down my notes from that meeting."
Seems like you got the complicated part backwards. She could handle something simple or quick while writing. Right?
When she didn't follow that up and stopped moving, Starlight Glimmer figured that was the end of the conversation. She just picked the princess up in her magic and carried her the rest of the way home. She seems on board. With luck, I'll have New Leaf back in no time!
So she has someone she lost herself?
Derpy laughed shortly. "Well. I loved him, some, but I wasn't in love. You had left for school. I was so proud! I thought I wanted to do that again. Make another wonderful foal. And I was horny. He was, too. And he was sweet. And dying. And a virgin. And… I just don't know what went right." She grinned.
-I actually approve! No need to get other's involved with a marriage ceremony under those circumstances.
This is a typo?
Seems like you got the complicated part backwards. She could handle something simple or quick while writing. Right?
So she has someone she lost herself?
-I actually approve! No need to get other's involved with a marriage ceremony under those circumstances.
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First - no, look at the event he just said it was.
Second - oops. Wrong word.
Third - she alluded to him in chapter 2.
Fourth - welllll, marriage wasn't the big potential problem here, more that he was the equivalent of 14 or something.
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First - Clever!
Second - Okay.
Third - I'll re-read.
Fourth - Oops! Don't know how I missed that!