After that promising introductive first chapter (made all the more frustrating by the fact that nothing was happening yet), I dove into this one with great expectations...

... and I believe I can say with confidence that they've been utterly met and exceeded. Can't wait to see the rest of Eris's lesson plan for Fluttershy!

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Glad to hear it!! I’ve got big plans for the rest, so hopefully it’ll be worth the wait too.

Most interesting. This definitely does immerse one into what it is like to be a 'human baby'. Perhaps, if Fluttershy remembers it, she may make a mad dash to find whatever may still remain of the portal to Equestria? Perhaps being a pony foal would be easier than a human baby? She'd maybe do better if not having to worry about this as an Equestria Girl?

There are certainly some good points made in just how much 'freedom' and 'ability' are lost to an infant / toddler. Though, as Fluttershy gets more into the lesson, she'll be most thankful for the abilities she grew from being raised by her parents. Perhaps she may even remember some times of dealing with her bothersome, and needy, brother, zephyr?