I really love the back and forth between Twi and Rarity in this story, it's probably better than the clop.. but that part is nice too 😆

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Thanks, do just mean in chapter 2 or in general?
I'd love to hear if anything in particular stood out to you

947538 I mean the story as a whole. I love literally ALL of their interactions lol. As for something specific... I noticed how bold twily is getting as this goes on, she started out kinda hesitant and awkward ( as she should have) but now it's like she thinks she some kinda sex god even keeping her cool with Rarity's teasing. And I just find that fantastic 😂 although, she's probably forgotten that Rarity isn't hers exclusively. So if somebody came sniffing around, I'm sure that would be a bubble popper

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I'm glad you picked up on that. I really wanted to show how differently Twilight acts at this stage of their relationship.
And while they aren't exclusive, they definitely have a mutual obsession for each other's body in particular