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Okay I like the premise here but the fact it's keeps flipping from Trixie wanting friends yo her pushing sunset away was kinda annoying, but if you were to say change the parts after pushing Sunset away to a "it's better this way" mentality your story would be infinitly better.
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Thank you. If I ever write a similar story I’ll do it like that. Sorry if it was jarring to shift from one prospective to the next.
I literally snorted at the line "it was time to get naked for friendship"
A line I hope I never have to say
Never say that again. That sounded so cringe coming from sunset or twilight
Naked for Friendship
Like Sucking Dick for Jesus