no

8955361
Por que?

8955542
что это значит?

8955545
Oh, I'm just asking what you dislike about the story. I'm not upset or anything, it just worries me. I worry that there are some big mistakes in the story I'm not seeing that are turning people off. I'd really appreciate any feedback, positive or negative.

8955550
oh, well....

This is the issue:

ANIME.

8955557
If you dislike anime, that's perfectly understandable. I can only enjoy a select few animes as the rest are consumed by moeshit and cringeworthy ecchi. I don't think you should downvote the story based on that alone, however. It'd deserve a downvote if you were interested in the premise and setting but found it disappointing or upsetting, not because you don't like the material the story is loosely based on.

Nicen't

I don't know why its getting thumbs down, it isn't too bad. Typical but not bad.

8956819
Yo man, any kind of feedback is worth it’s weight in gold to me right now. Never done a long form story before and it’s showing.