Dudeguy who likes tiny magic horse creatures and occasional lecherous thoughts.
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8955361
Por que?
8955542
что это значит?
8955545
Oh, I'm just asking what you dislike about the story. I'm not upset or anything, it just worries me. I worry that there are some big mistakes in the story I'm not seeing that are turning people off. I'd really appreciate any feedback, positive or negative.
8955550
oh, well....
This is the issue:
ANIME.
8955557
If you dislike anime, that's perfectly understandable. I can only enjoy a select few animes as the rest are consumed by moeshit and cringeworthy ecchi. I don't think you should downvote the story based on that alone, however. It'd deserve a downvote if you were interested in the premise and setting but found it disappointing or upsetting, not because you don't like the material the story is loosely based on.
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I don't know why its getting thumbs down, it isn't too bad. Typical but not bad.
8956819
Yo man, any kind of feedback is worth it’s weight in gold to me right now. Never done a long form story before and it’s showing.
Congratulations Anon your life is now a harem anime.
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Being that I mainly used to write smut, I almost wrote it that way. I’m trying to write a more complex story with more conflict and deeper connections and interactions between the characters. So, I’m gonna feel like an asshole if it winds up reading like a harem fantasy anyway.
Thanks for readin’, by the way!
8957054
I didn't say it was a bad thing. In fact fics where Anon hooks up with all the girls is one of my guilty pleasure reads.
8957057
It’s fun sometimes, but I really want to challenge myself with this one. To that end, if you find any errors or syntax mistakes please leave a comment about it. I haven’t got an editor yet so I’m very grateful for any help that is offered.
8956873
Well that is the best attitude to go at with writing.
This is an interesting take on a technical crossover. I dig it
Are Dash’s boobs going to get big or super huge?
Hey man listen. No matter what people say you just keep doing what you love. And I for one am very interested in this story. I'm a big hajime no ippo fan myself. And if you like I'd be happy to he a proof reader.
8957070
Hey man listen. No matter what people say you just keep doing what you love. And I for one am very interested in this story. I'm a big hajime no ippo fan myself. And if you like I'd be happy to he a proof reader.
Please update this! I need more hajime no ippo fanfics and this is a good one!
Damn what an awesome story I genuinely hope it gets updated someday
I need an update