Hi Katzoo12, thanks for the comment. I'm glad to hear you love the poem, please feel free to share it and support it :)
In regards to your query, there is intended to be a level of confusion and ambiguity as it is taking place in the dark and they can only rely on sound. And the sudden squelch sound, followed by silence indicates foul play. You'll have to read on to find out the cause and their fates :)
Hope this helps in making it come together for you.
So....who died here? Rainbow? It’s just a bit confusing. But I love this poem!
Hi Katzoo12, thanks for the comment. I'm glad to hear you love the poem, please feel free to share it and support it :)
In regards to your query, there is intended to be a level of confusion and ambiguity as it is taking place in the dark and they can only rely on sound. And the sudden squelch sound, followed by silence indicates foul play. You'll have to read on to find out the cause and their fates :)
Hope this helps in making it come together for you.