So long story short after a chance meeting with a certain chaotic being I get booted from Earth to Equestria and to top it off all the inhabitants are anthromorphic. Fun no? (Self-insert)
Ok, first things first lots of typos. One of the reasons why people don't like self inserts is because a lot of the time the writer doesn't realize they're making themselves out to look like an edgy teenager, and no one likes an edgy teenager... except for maybe edgy teenagers. Another reason like this chapter is because of all the plot conveniences. Other than those things I thought this chapter was pretty okay.
Damn!! Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
This story is interested
Ok, first things first lots of typos. One of the reasons why people don't like self inserts is because a lot of the time the writer doesn't realize they're making themselves out to look like an edgy teenager, and no one likes an edgy teenager... except for maybe edgy teenagers. Another reason like this chapter is because of all the plot conveniences. Other than those things I thought this chapter was pretty okay.