A demon and a sentient virus walk into pony land, adventure ensues.
Awesome chapter, you are doing an amazing job. I can't wait to read the next one.
8500888Just so you know I wrote all of that in three days
not bad. fast but the story needed it.
So many people favoriting this story just why?
Good story so far, but considering there's prototype elements in it you should probably switch it too mature just to be on the safe side
8503066Can you reword that please
8503071I fixed it
(Stupid voice sensor)
8503074Done
“I’m going by Alex Uhciha. You can go use anything just don’t make it stupid.”
Uchiha
8516445FUCKING damn it
Edit: fixed
This is neat
“What fun is there in making sense?”
Just. Stop.
Very rushed. Not only that but you have to make references not super obvious. And this is super obvious.
His eyes flutter open as he sits up and looks at our new surroundings “Ok, what the fuck happened?” He more of demands than ass..
He demands more ass............ i like him.
8962655OH MY GOD I kinda want to keep that there
Awesome chapter, you are doing an amazing job. I can't wait to read the next one.
8500888
Just so you know I wrote all of that in three days
not bad. fast but the story needed it.
So many people favoriting this story just why?
Good story so far, but considering there's prototype elements in it you should probably switch it too mature just to be on the safe side
8503066
Can you reword that please
8503071
I fixed it
(Stupid voice sensor)
8503074
Done
Uchiha
8516445
FUCKING damn it
Edit: fixed
This is neat
Just. Stop.
Very rushed. Not only that but you have to make references not super obvious. And this is super obvious.
He demands more ass............ i like him.
8962655
OH MY GOD I kinda want to keep that there