While this story shows promise , I have noticed grammar issues such as not capitalizing the first letter at the start of a sentence and not capitalizing proper nouns . I strongly suggest availing yourself to the services of an editor .
8564089 Yes I know I have a lot of those as well as run on sentences, I do try my best as for an editor I am trying to find one but I don't have money to pay one for their services and I would hate to ask one to do so for free. I do go back every once and a while and fix what I can.
While this story shows promise , I have noticed grammar issues such as not capitalizing the first letter at the start of a sentence and not capitalizing proper nouns . I strongly suggest availing yourself to the services of an editor .
8564089
Yes I know I have a lot of those as well as run on sentences, I do try my best as for an editor I am trying to find one but I don't have money to pay one for their services and I would hate to ask one to do so for free. I do go back every once and a while and fix what I can.
10/10 ign from the cat on your keyboard apisdjasdoasdpasod
id like to imagine simon as key huy quan, dont know why