ignore those two dislikes. They're just insta-dislikers for the gore tag. This is written well, and everypony seems to be in charecter.

I think this story has a nice description. It brought me over with the picture, and there's nothing out of place.

908182 Listen to him, he's right. Ignore those first dislikes. Here, I'll balance it out, fav, and hope that it goes out as I think it will.

WHOO! This is my second pony almost dies fic I've read.