8018280 holy shit. Plot twist

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Although there are some musical people in the story, I'm not going to be putting songs up that the characters 'made'. Just feels too weird and plagiarizy to me.

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Heh, wait until next chapter. Which I'll probably end up putting up pretty soon actually, since I'm supposed to get two feet of snow dumped on me later today, and wouldn't be surprised if I lose power.

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It's true, I'm pretty minimalistic with settings unless they're extremely important to the scene. I've been told more than once that I write more like a screenwriter than an author of prose. I guess I just get wrapped up in the character interactions and forget they're not happening in a void, or that just because I can picture the scene doesn't mean anyone else can if I don't tell them what I'm seeing in my head.

8020170 yikes on that snow good luck with that
hope you stay warm

Btw its snowing where I live too

"Come on, Octy, you can't really be judging Lemon just by the fact that she goes to a certain school." Flash interjected tentatively. Octavia cast a glance at Flash and quirked a smile.

"Of course not. I went to it, myself, after all."

Silence descended.