Great to see a side story of this story and I hope to see more of this story soon. I feel that the first chapter was rather rushed, but the next one what at a more comfortable pacing. I think that the second chapter what much more interesting especially with the Octavia parts, I think a little more character development would help too. Hope to see more of this soon.
Great to see a side story of this story and I hope to see more of this story soon. I feel that the first chapter was rather rushed, but the next one what at a more comfortable pacing. I think that the second chapter what much more interesting especially with the Octavia parts, I think a little more character development would help too. Hope to see more of this soon.
Can never go wrong with adding in some Trixie to the side-story mix.
Cant wait for more :3
More from you? Excellent.
Maybe add some Flash Sentry.
How about Zecora? We do not have enough fatty Zecora.