On the matter of Succubi, I don't really understand how their abilities work, (as I said I never played Dante's inferno) so I had this question. Wouldn't it have made more sense for the Succubus to have taken a form that Sweetie Belle naturally found attractive, such as a fellow pony, similar to Vergil's own equine form, or can Succubi only appear in the form of human women? I mean I just find it hard to believe Sweetie Belle would be attracted to a human, which I'm still convinced that her first time seeing one was in limbo.
I am also convinced that the circle of lust is probably the most mentally scarring place Sweetie Belle will be going through. Especially considering everything down there wanted to perform... intercourse with her.
Anyway, this is getting really good, and I can't wait to read more.
8479590 The succubi as I portray them here are vastly different from how they behave in the game. Though I do borrow elements from both the game and the original poem, I also take many creative liberties with creatures and characters. In regards to the seduction part, I wanted to illustrate the succubus as an object of raw sexual desire. Something that Sweetie Belle, regardless of the age difference or the species barrier, could not resist wanting beyond rational thinking. I probably could have portrayed this better if I had written Sweetie as being confused and asking Virgil to explain how she could possibly have been attracted to the succubus.
I am very glad to hear you're enjoying the story so much
Wow, now was interesting.
On the matter of Succubi, I don't really understand how their abilities work, (as I said I never played Dante's inferno) so I had this question. Wouldn't it have made more sense for the Succubus to have taken a form that Sweetie Belle naturally found attractive, such as a fellow pony, similar to Vergil's own equine form, or can Succubi only appear in the form of human women? I mean I just find it hard to believe Sweetie Belle would be attracted to a human, which I'm still convinced that her first time seeing one was in limbo.
I am also convinced that the circle of lust is probably the most mentally scarring place Sweetie Belle will be going through. Especially considering everything down there wanted to perform... intercourse with her.
Anyway, this is getting really good, and I can't wait to read more.
8479590
The succubi as I portray them here are vastly different from how they behave in the game. Though I do borrow elements from both the game and the original poem, I also take many creative liberties with creatures and characters. In regards to the seduction part, I wanted to illustrate the succubus as an object of raw sexual desire. Something that Sweetie Belle, regardless of the age difference or the species barrier, could not resist wanting beyond rational thinking. I probably could have portrayed this better if I had written Sweetie as being confused and asking Virgil to explain how she could possibly have been attracted to the succubus.
I am very glad to hear you're enjoying the story so much