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Wolfgang Fyst
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Very well written and the plot is awesome, I am also a fan of Dantes inferno the game.
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Thank you kindly
I love it!
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Thank you
Love it
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Glad you're enjoying the story
There is nothing like this anywhere and I and so happy I read this. Well written and amazingly well thought out. I look forward to every chapter. Here is to hoping they find a way out of the circle of anger. Also Mammon is awesome.
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Lol, glad to hear you're enjoying the story! And Mammon was an absolute joy to write, definitely my favorite character thus far.
Again an amazing chapter I look forward to this next chapter.
Woooo my fav circle
This has so far been able to hold my interest. While I have never actually played Dante's Inferno, this story is rather well written and I will definitely keep reading.
Though I just wanted to say that Sweetie Belle seems a little too calm about her situation. I mean she is told that the only way home is through a place that is there for solely for the eternal damnation of souls. I mean she is still just a young filly, I would have expected her to shed some tears or comment on being home sick, or something, but for the most part she pretty much just goes with like it's just another day at the office or something.
Sorry about that mini rant. At any rate I do enjoy this story and I will definitely be reading more!
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Thank you for the feedback, and I'm glad to hear the story's kept your interest so far. I agree that I have written Sweetie Belle to be a little too calm about being forced to venture through such a nightmarish place as Hell. I think maybe I was so in love with the idea of a child as the central character that I forgot to write her impressions of Hell from the viewpoint of a child. In hindsight it would have been more appropriate to either 1) rewrite Sweetie Belle's character to be more in line with the mindset of a person her age, or 2) change the main protagonist to one of the more adult characters.
Wow, now was interesting.
On the matter of Succubi, I don't really understand how their abilities work, (as I said I never played Dante's inferno) so I had this question. Wouldn't it have made more sense for the Succubus to have taken a form that Sweetie Belle naturally found attractive, such as a fellow pony, similar to Vergil's own equine form, or can Succubi only appear in the form of human women? I mean I just find it hard to believe Sweetie Belle would be attracted to a human, which I'm still convinced that her first time seeing one was in limbo.
I am also convinced that the circle of lust is probably the most mentally scarring place Sweetie Belle will be going through. Especially considering everything down there wanted to perform... intercourse with her.
Anyway, this is getting really good, and I can't wait to read more.
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The succubi as I portray them here are vastly different from how they behave in the game. Though I do borrow elements from both the game and the original poem, I also take many creative liberties with creatures and characters. In regards to the seduction part, I wanted to illustrate the succubus as an object of raw sexual desire. Something that Sweetie Belle, regardless of the age difference or the species barrier, could not resist wanting beyond rational thinking. I probably could have portrayed this better if I had written Sweetie as being confused and asking Virgil to explain how she could possibly have been attracted to the succubus.
I am very glad to hear you're enjoying the story so much
Hmm, well Gluttony was disgusting.
I actually don't have any confusion this time, so wonderful work!
I find it interesting how the rulers of the circles have so far shown little interest in their existence. With Asmodeus hinting at it's wish to use Sweetie's body for horrible acts and yet, not following through on those oh so subtle threats, and Beelzebub just wanted them gone as fast as they arrived. It definitely makes me curious towards the attitudes of the rulers they have yet to meet.
I am also curious how the denizens of Ponyville are reacting to Sweetie Belle's disappearance. And furthermore if they are going to have some role in the story later.
And I am also worried about Sweetie Belle. Lust was mentally scarring and Gluttony was just disgusting, but both had some level of life-threatening danger. The rulers might be indifferent to her presence, but the other demons don't seem to care if she's alive or dead. And considering circles like wrath still exists, it worries me for the dangers she has yet to face.
Either way, this is becoming one Hell (pun intended) of a thrill ride!
We need to find group to put this in so more people can see it
Too bad Sweetie is facing this without Apple Boom and Shootaloo...
I quiver from the horrid anticipation... it's just SO GOOD!
Does Sweetie Belle get raped in this story? I'm not going to read it if that happens.
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Nothing so vulgar befalls Sweetie Belle.
This chapter was just masterfully crafted... I absolutely love what you did with Abbadon and his portayal,
I just found this story a few hours ago, figured it may be a decent read before I go to sleep.
I now notice the time, and am in awe that your writing has kept me enthralled in Sweetie's journey through hell.
I must admit, there's quite a bit in your story that I'm going to have to look up later, curiosity getting the better of me and what not.
I wasn't tracking this story before, and it wasn't in my favorites either. It is now on my tracking list, as well as my favorites.
I'm looking forward to Sweetie's meeting with Lucifer.
Do we need to be concerned for Sweetie having to Traverse Purgatory and Paradise in other Chapters of the Divine Comedy?
Wow, beautifully written as always, and I can’t wait to read the next chapter.
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No, we won't be delving into the latter two-thirds of the Comedy. I've toyed with the idea here and there, even considered swapping in Applebloom and Scootaloo for sequels, but I honestly have zero desire to explore Purgatory and Paradise.
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True Enough, and I noticed your version of Lucifer has Elements from Paradise Lost.
This was the wildest ride I have ever had the privilege of reading. The time and care taken for each and every interaction, event, near death so on and so forth is something so astronomical the words needed to describe it are forever out of my reach... Instead, I say this: GOOD SHOW!!
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Thank you so much!
Good story, too bad Sweetie don't remember anything, I could imagine her as a prophet of Lucifer, or maybe trying to make sense to her dream and asking her sister, her friends and the Princesses. Maybe even finding Discord is familiar with it.
Very, very, very well written. I loved every moment of this story.
Maybe you should do a sequel where Sweetie goes to heaven?
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Thank you very much, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it!
Unfortunately, I have neither plans nor desire to write a sequel. At least, not for the time being. It is possible that I could change my mind somewhere in the future, but I wouldn't hold my breath.
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Hmm, is it alright if i can wright a sequel? With your help, seeing on how I won’t have the vocabulary as close to what you have written.
Oh man this story is awesome.
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That's probably a good thing, to think on it. Those three fuel each other's excitement and eagerness to do new things to find their special talents. Could you imagine them getting marks down here?
"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS SOUL TORTURERS YAAAAAAAAY!"
Virgil is just shaking his head behind them, wondering what he's gotten himself into.