997815 I'm glad Pinkie Pie approves lol. Thanks much!
998135 Despite it being an accurate medical statement, I can see the merit in what you say; I'll give it a quick look and see if I can't change that to something a little less...unpleasant. Thank you for the read and comment!
As much as I find Mindless clop hilarious, you do a great job of showing the opposite. It's clop that is motivated by true love, and resembles a perfect marriage. I can only assume you hold these same values to yourself. well done.
... well done
Pretty good. However, I suggest you come up with a descriptor for "erection" other than "blood-filled". That's just...wrong on many levels.
997815 I'm glad Pinkie Pie approves lol. Thanks much!
998135 Despite it being an accurate medical statement, I can see the merit in what you say; I'll give it a quick look and see if I can't change that to something a little less...unpleasant. Thank you for the read and comment!
Ah, return of the trusty 'withers!' Seriously, why do you love that word? It's so...awkward.
As much as I find Mindless clop hilarious, you do a great job of showing the opposite. It's clop that is motivated by true love, and resembles a perfect marriage. I can only assume you hold these same values to yourself. well done.