Look forward to seeing your next chapter kinda curious about where it is going.
If anything I have to criticize is the pace it seems fast but maybe it's just me lol completely possible add more cheese...( Filler information) ... And everything will be Sunshine and rainbows
Ship has sailed guy!!! (Titanic sinks) oops...
Look forward to seeing your next chapter kinda curious about where it is going.
If anything I have to criticize is the pace it seems fast but maybe it's just me lol completely possible add more cheese...( Filler information) ... And everything will be Sunshine and rainbows
7743430 well I'm still new to this so I'm not good with putting as much detail as other stories, but I'm trying.
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Your doing fine it was only a suggestion to help with the flow of the story, as new to writing... Or at least this site your doing great
7750504 thnx that would be appreciated!