Good, this is very good. Haunting, just the kind of story I enjoy. Not something that beats you over the head with gore and blood, or jump scares. Although you might want to go back and take out the bold tag, half the story's formatted bold.
7688479 It's a problem with the conversion. I don't know why, but it switches the bold tags and does that as a result. I forgot to check for it this time. Whoops.
It's interesting
Good, this is very good. Haunting, just the kind of story I enjoy. Not something that beats you over the head with gore and blood, or jump scares. Although you might want to go back and take out the bold tag, half the story's formatted bold.
7688479
It's a problem with the conversion. I don't know why, but it switches the bold tags and does that as a result. I forgot to check for it this time. Whoops.
pinkie?why pinkie?