Equestrians' Jaeger
written by Twilight Archon
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Grammar definetely is a big weak point of this story but that can be fixed with some help.
Could also be a bit longer and the scenes could go on a bit longer, as right now they are going by a bit too fast.
Other than that, i'd say you did a good job here.
7747974 I do need to get in touch with my editor no idea where he went of to he's been quite for 3 weeks.
7747977 i may be able to help a little but can't right now since i don't have access to my computer
A bit too hard to use my phone for that....
7747982 ok thanks!
7748058 i can assist as well !
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Thanks you two Pm me your email so I can share the doc with you! Thanks for your kindness!