So, this is obviously an attempt to make a troll fanfiction in the style of My Immortal. No offense author, but this "story" fails. I realize this is probably nothing more than a joke and you couldn't care less, but I have nothing better to do. If your trying to write a bad fanfiction or a troll fiction you are going about it the wrong way. A bad fanfiction has grammar mistakes, but not too many. And it's relatively serious not in tone, but you can tell someone put some type of effort into it. It also walks a thin line between being hilariously bad and just another troll fiction. This doesn't do any of that. It's obvious this is a troll fiction, but there's no effort to it. It's too deliberate to be a bad fanfic and not silly enough to be a troll fanfiction.
taking it this just to piss off your 'Fellow Bronies', am I close or not? Why most of writers like yourself hate to edit or SPELLCHECK their own work?
7620531 I had a spell checker, but she turnedd oyt to be a bitchh soe I doumped her
So, this is obviously an attempt to make a troll fanfiction in the style of My Immortal. No offense author, but this "story" fails. I realize this is probably nothing more than a joke and you couldn't care less, but I have nothing better to do.
If your trying to write a bad fanfiction or a troll fiction you are going about it the wrong way. A bad fanfiction has grammar mistakes, but not too many. And it's relatively serious not in tone, but you can tell someone put some type of effort into it. It also walks a thin line between being hilariously bad and just another troll fiction. This doesn't do any of that. It's obvious this is a troll fiction, but there's no effort to it. It's too deliberate to be a bad fanfic and not silly enough to be a troll fanfiction.
7621049 im am trying!! your very rude but youlk see :)
There's nothing wrong with communism.
7622634 fuck u