D-Day plus 27-During WW2, an American platoon make their way through German occupied France towards Paris, but they find themselves lost in a strange world. And from the looks of it...they aren't the first humans to set forth here either...
Edit: If you were referring to grammar mistakes, as ohthatguy pointed out, I have fixed many of them. But judging by your lack of response I will just assume it was the story itself. Though some actual feedback would have been appreciated.
9293866 I looked it over and found a few misuses, which I corrected. Thanks for the feed back, that chapter should have been edited completely, but I suppose many eyes are better than the few.
I wonder how the ponies will feel if they found out about what the Nazis did in their spare time. I just hope that the German soldiers in Equestria are against with what they did.
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How so?
Edit: If you were referring to grammar mistakes, as ohthatguy pointed out, I have fixed many of them. But judging by your lack of response I will just assume it was the story itself. Though some actual feedback would have been appreciated.
Fantastic to have another chapter in this amazing story
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I looked it over and found a few misuses, which I corrected. Thanks for the feed back, that chapter should have been edited completely, but I suppose many eyes are better than the few.
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Glad you're liking it enough to come back, despite the average wait of two months per chapter, heh.
After re-reading this I can see that this story is going places.
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Yeah, it really would if I could actually get to writing. I barely get time to check story updates, heh.
(Sorry about the late reply.)
I wonder how the ponies will feel if they found out about what the Nazis did in their spare time. I just hope that the German soldiers in Equestria are against with what they did.
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Eh in my honest opinion I very much dislike these Germans already.