Carrot Cake knows how tough it is to raise a unicorn. Especially if you're not one yourself. Sometimes what a unicorn wants, she gets. Pumpkin Cake wants to give him a Father's Day that he will never forget. (No matter how hard he tries.)
This opening was really, really telly. I think you could have assumed a bit more familiarity with the first fic considering that it was a contest winner. But I’m still interested to see where this goes - I’ll check in again once I’ve finished reading.
I scrolled through the story so fast that i managed to piece together a funny joke
This opening was really, really telly. I think you could have assumed a bit more familiarity with the first fic considering that it was a contest winner. But I’m still interested to see where this goes - I’ll check in again once I’ve finished reading.
I love seeing the story in Pumpkin’s POV. She is indeed one smart mare.