You still need to remember to put periods at the end of sentences with quotes. As for the story, why do I have a feeling that Lance's disguise is going to bite him in the flank? As for the sex, keep it within the story, but have something saying when the clop begins and when the clop ends.
You still need to remember to put periods at the end of sentences with quotes.
As for the story, why do I have a feeling that Lance's disguise is going to bite him in the flank? As for the sex, keep it within the story, but have something saying when the clop begins and when the clop ends.
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You sir, have just given me a silly and reasonable idea for the next chapter.
Thank you
I REALLY like this story so far, it has a good plot and alot of potential. Please keep it up and i wish you the best of luck with this.
In addition, id say go with A but dont make it to far fetched...