The naughty bits of The New Guy.
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Good chapter I must say. Din't expect Twilight to be so in to the dirty talking THAT much!
I get this was your first time doing this but you missed doing a scene about Twilight's virginity being broken. And even if it's half as much as whats show on tv and anime that shit HURTS being broken at first. Just some healthy criticism.
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Good chapter I must say. Din't expect Twilight to be so in to the dirty talking THAT much!
I get this was your first time doing this but you missed doing a scene about Twilight's virginity being broken. And even if it's half as much as whats show on tv and anime that shit HURTS being broken at first. Just some healthy criticism.