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Is Jason going to be in this
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No but I bet you'll get your fill with my "Jason vs" stories
Get an editor to help you with this. When I can see grammatical errors in title card synopsis it is pretty much a clear indicator that one is needed.
With that said, I will check back in a few weeks to see if it has been cleaned up any. Reserving my up or down vote till then.
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Uh...okay
7049127 Don't take it the wrong way. I am not saying this to be a jerk, but saying this because this story has uniqueness and potential. If I thought there was absolutely nothing worthwhile or salvageable about your tale I wouldn't even bother to offer advice. Having someone to provide editing/proofreading to catch spelling, capitalization and other grammatical errors (perhaps even acting as a sounding board to see if any ideas you might add to the story make sense or should be passed over) will help polish up your 'gem' of a story and make it shine all the brighter.
For the longest freaking time I didn't notice the sequel note didn't work Its updated so now you guys will know