Don't worry about being late, it's your story after all. Rushing things doesn't help, believe me I speak from experience.
And if I may suggest to add a marking or something when you switch between characters? At the start, you switch from Fluttershy to Rarity to Rainbow Dash and so on without any space. If you space them out a with a line it makes reading easier.
Also, I can't see this ending happily. Twilight's gone of the deep end, more so than usually. So I await the next chapter eagerly.
791965 Thanks for the advice. I put a space between the start of the parts with fluttershy, Rarity and the rest. I wasn't sure what the protocol was for that, but the spaces seem to be ok. Thanks again for the review!
Well this I wasn't expecting. How is it gonna help her gathering all of her friends pets? Is she goinna become some sort of super quimera. My God! She will become the next Discord?! Anyqay great chapter. Nevermind the "delay". We all have thing to do on the other side of the screen. Just don't forget to keep up the good work.
793794 Thanks again for the positive review! I was toying with a few ideas, but I finally settled on where I want the story to go from here. I will be starting the next chapter soon.
Don't worry about being late, it's your story after all. Rushing things doesn't help, believe me I speak from experience.
And if I may suggest to add a marking or something when you switch between characters? At the start, you switch from Fluttershy to Rarity to Rainbow Dash and so on without any space. If you space them out a with a line it makes reading easier.
Also, I can't see this ending happily. Twilight's gone of the deep end, more so than usually. So I await the next chapter eagerly.
791965 Thanks for the advice. I put a space between the start of the parts with fluttershy, Rarity and the rest. I wasn't sure what the protocol was for that, but the spaces seem to be ok. Thanks again for the review!
Well this I wasn't expecting. How is it gonna help her gathering all of her friends pets? Is she goinna become some sort of super quimera. My God! She will become the next Discord?!
Anyqay great chapter. Nevermind the "delay". We all have thing to do on the other side of the screen. Just don't forget to keep up the good work.
793794 Thanks again for the positive review! I was toying with a few ideas, but I finally settled on where I want the story to go from here. I will be starting the next chapter soon.