I'm a little surprised that Harshwhinny is teaching Math and English, but English classes beyond middle school tend to be kind of a joke anyway.

Looking forward to seeing how this turns out!

6942162 ummm... oops... In my defense, over here it ain't an uncommon combination. ..but...Sorry, my bad? Also, the second part will be ready in a few days.

Not bad! I almost want to say it puts mine to shame, but we were clearly going for different themes. It needs a good editing pass or two, as I did notice a few errors. Quite a few, actually.

But overall, you have a solid concept and I am interested in seeing where this goes!

6942299 Thanks! Yeah, this storys origin is basically the idea of it being awkward and kinda cute hearing Fluttershy talk dirty and then it just got worse. But I would lie if I said your story wasn't an inspiration. We all want to see Fluttershy happy, don’t we?

I was a bit to eager to publish, but I Will give it a run - through tomorrow. I will at least get the worst baddies.

6942335 Aw shucks, you're making me blush!

And you gotta be careful about that. Being eager to publish, I mean. It's okay to be excited, but it's like I'm always telling a good friend of mine, The Hat Man, you can't rush d'excellence. Time was, though, I did the same thing. You seem to be a competent writer, so I'm not talking down to you or anything. I'm just making a point.

6942370 yeah, yeah, I know...Guilty as charged. And it's a sound advice so you don't have to apologise. In fact, I promise I will not rush the completion of chapter two.

Not sure how I feel about that title, knowing what it's referencing.

6943033 FINALLY someone gets that reference.

I think this story is in line with the end of that one, but I know what you mean.

6943033 What's it referencing?

What's a snorcher?

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The Vagina Monologues is made up of a varying number of monologues...
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The Little Coochie Snorcher That Could, in which a woman recalls memories of traumatic sexual experiences in her childhood and a self-described "positive healing" sexual experience in her adolescent years with an older woman. This particular skit has sparked outrage, numerous controversies and criticisms due to its content... In the original version, she is 13, but later versions changed her age to 16. It also originally included the line, "If it was rape, it was a good rape", which was removed from later versions.

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Orrr, maybe it's referencing The Little Engine That Could?

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Wow. You learn something new every day. It's like this : in 2004 I watched the vagina monologues. It’s a very interesting piece, it swings from raunchy stand-up to pure tragedy with slice-of-life inbetween. The skit whose title I am referensing made a very strong impression on me, Although the last words about rape was gone and the girl was aged up when I saw it. I thought it was consensual. While it is a lot of abuse in the skit, what stayed on my mind was that the narrator found that sex could (and should) be a positive experience in spite of her previous experiences. And I also found the fraser "coochie snorcher" as adorable and quite powerful to use in contrast to the skits darker parts.

So, what made me use it as theme in a light clopfic? Well, I liked "coochie snorcher" and waited for a moment to use it. Then I read Sfacf and was blown away by the story an characherization but what fascinated me the most was the clash between the naive and the cynic and how both grew as persons from their meetings.
"Coochie snorcher" sounds like something you would say if you are a bit naive or at least unexperienced. It felt like something Fluttershy would say and think. But she also has this idea that you have sex for the others sake more than your own. She sees her sexuality as a sacrifice. And in the end, she can’t go through with it since her body repells that idea. And while Adagio is a selfish siren (reformed) she does believe that the best sex is when both parts are equally in on it. Adagio wants Fluttershy to learn that sex is something both parts should benefir from and that she needs to learn to like herself, not only to herself, but also in the presence of others.

To give you The short answer; it’s a reference to both. (I was going to add "I think I can" somewhere in the story at first) And in my opinion, both storys share a theme; To do stuff you didn’t think you were able to.

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And then, part 2 was uploaded! I would be much obliged if you gentlebronys tell me what you think.

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Welp, I guess this'll be great.