...this is the best chapter so far. It doesn't feel rushed, and I finally find myself emotionally attached to your characters. I think you could have gone into more detail at different points of the fighting, but overall it was well done.

"Got your frilly panties on?"

"Aye."

Whoops... lol

Two things....

1)a young White-Leg that had taken an arrow to a knee was riding on his back.
yes, yes... this reference pleases the Turtle.

and 2) Innuendos ... innuendos everywhere.