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Well I noticed you accidentally called Volt "Vault" once early on in the chapter, and the transition to Fluttershy's cottage was... Unnatural at best, as abrupt as ground glass in the eyes at worst, but given how the chapter was structured not a lot could be done about that.
The section at the end of the chapter where you noted that you've already explained what a Warframe is in parenthesis, while functional, still causes that break in flow. Might I suggest an alternative similar to "Nyx's "eyes" lit up, the jaws twitching as if they were trying to smile, and she set to the task of explaining what her and her team mates were: Warframes."
But that's partially just a stylistic difference between the two of us.