It was hot for a while, but eventually got a little too intense for my liking

Overall I did still enjoy it, and the after care scene made it all better. Nice chapter, can't wait to see more, hopefully some fluff in the future.

6800701 worry not my friend! For in the future we shall explore many avenues, and honestly I'd love to turn it into a little game. Have people let me know what they wanna see, and if they get mega specific and want that old carnal itch scratched like myou good buddy Technophile, commissioner of this lovely piece and reason I'm writing instead of sobbing about this stupid shitty breakup, then we can talk, but if everyone has a little consensus then dammit I shall giveth freely for the people!

Very nice chapter, my friend. I'll be keeping my eye on this story.

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Every damn time you start out a comment with an exclamation, I imagine you as some big, Nordic-looking fucker from the middle ages. Like you're standing in the middle of the cobbled marketplace, on your stone stool, proclaiming said comment like you're spinning a manly tale of heroism, the likes of which no one has ever seen.

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Like this guy. You look like this guy in my head when you get all exclamatory.

6811938 it's really funny you mention that, considering as a pagan I'll often practice religiously with Heathens (modern Nordic pagans). However I admit I'm a fair bit less bombastic irl. Unless I'm holding my battle axe, for some reason every other word with that in hand is "FOR THE AESIR, AND FOR VALHALLA!"

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If you are holding a battle-axe, and every other phrase isn't that, then there's a problem. There is a certain 'battle-axe etiquette' that ought to be adhered to when wielding said weapon. In fact, I'm pretty sure you get smited when you fail to shout that phrase within an allotted amount of time.

6813065 well it's being held normally, though on occasion it must be pulled FROM THE SKULL OF MY ENEMIES!

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Honestly I couldn't find a suitable image to reply with... so here's Luna as a blanket instead.
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